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edward
Feb 20, 2006 20:13:27 GMT -5
Post by Edward on Feb 20, 2006 20:13:27 GMT -5
if we had a char. on the old VHIS must we create a new one?
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edward
Feb 20, 2006 20:23:28 GMT -5
Post by [Reimei's]h o p e on Feb 20, 2006 20:23:28 GMT -5
Yeah... All the information was losr.
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edward
Feb 20, 2006 20:33:26 GMT -5
Post by Edward on Feb 20, 2006 20:33:26 GMT -5
ok then ill post my app in this topic in one sec. EDIT: here it is - Character Info -
[/u] Name:Edward Elric Nicknames: Ed, Edo Name meaning: nothing special Ranking: none yet... in training Age: 15 Gender: Male Love Life: none Eye Color: Yellow/gold Appearance :well he's supposed to resemble Ed from fullmetal alchemist like I said, for those of you who dont know him hes in my sig and avatar. His hair is yellow-blonde, long with hair in his face and a braid. He wears a black shirt underneath his red jacket/trenchcoat thingey, and he wears oddly shiny pants. He is short for his age, 4'6 to be exact. Quote:"How much crack did you put on your waffles this morning?" "whoopie frickin doo" Personallity: Can be emotional at times but has a very strong heart and is sarcastic and mischevious. He is a born genious scientist and believes that everything has a logical explanation. He is very strategy-based in battle has many clever moves. Works good in small, 2-3 person groups. Makes friends easily and is outgoing. History: note: his story has nothing to do with FMA's story, remember. Hes a totally different Ed. his history is Mostly as a normal kid. Nobody but him knows why he suddenly decieds to go into training, but he knows it is revenge. He is deadset on killing them for what theyve done. I will work out who "them" are and what theyve done as I go, im not the type to reveal elaborate stories all at once. Other:he is meant to resemble and act like the FMA ed, but his story is of my own creation. Role-Play Sample: your probably not gonna know whats going on in this role play, and it has nothing to do with FMA or even my character. just some random horror thingy i came up with off the top. He whipped around the corner, and froze for a second. He quickly returned behind his corner, out of sight of it. he got the chills. He suddenly felt his heart sink, and he felt guilt and fear like no other. He saw him standing there, with his rusty knife, ready to lunge... He tries to clear his mind, all he can think is run. But his intuition tells him to take off his shoes first. So he does, which makes for a silent escape. On his way to the door, he finds his friends gun laying on the ground in a puddle "where did you go? just stay alive, my friend" he thinks to himself. He picks up the gun, and decides to turn back to face off with that guy, or whatever he was. He gets back to his corner and puts on his shoes. He peeps around, and it isnt there. But he can hear it breathing. He turns around quickly, that sinking feeling in his heart again. There it is. He squints his eyes, screams in anger "HAAAAHH!!!!" and pulls the trigger 6 times. Nothing but dry clicks. The adrenaline wears off and he realizes hes screwed. His buddy must've used all the ammo! he throws the gun at that half man, half thing and it screeches in pain. Now its pissed. He runs, but it grabs his foot. He manages to squirm out of his shoe, and continues running. It throws the shoe at him, it clunks him in the head, hard enough to knock him unconcious. When he wakes up, his head hurts, and his hand is throbbing in pain. He looks over and discovers his left hand is missing, although wrapped and bandaged. He screams in both fear and pain. He tries to calm himself, looks around, and notices the gun is gone. He smells fresh gunpowder in the air. He realizes he has had some help. "thanks, old pal" He says to himself, and gets up. All that night, he looked through that house, and never found his friend, nor that creature. They had both dissapeared. [/center] yeah, I know that RP sample was a little creepy.
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edward
Feb 22, 2006 18:19:54 GMT -5
Post by [Reimei's]h o p e on Feb 22, 2006 18:19:54 GMT -5
Be more descriptive, pretty please! -huggles- Read the rules for the code-word, and you need a role-play sample.
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edward
Feb 24, 2006 18:38:03 GMT -5
Post by Edward on Feb 24, 2006 18:38:03 GMT -5
I fixed it, I tried to add more description, more background, and i added a super-weird roleplay sample.
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edward
Feb 24, 2006 19:47:07 GMT -5
Post by [Reimei's]h o p e on Feb 24, 2006 19:47:07 GMT -5
The role-play sample needs to be longer, still. ^^; Sorry. And You could be a little more descriptive.
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edward
Feb 24, 2006 19:50:32 GMT -5
Post by Edward on Feb 24, 2006 19:50:32 GMT -5
Man, im a b*tch, are'nt I? lol. OK ill fix it. again. [
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edward
Feb 26, 2006 10:16:17 GMT -5
Post by [Reimei's]h o p e on Feb 26, 2006 10:16:17 GMT -5
Much better.
Accepted.
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